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The First Poet Attempt - Rewritten

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When you walk with me, you'll notice my blight.
My sins of the past, still dawn to me.

The warrior's bound, the rogue's denied.
The sinner's came, to destroy thy time.

Respect once earned, now lost eternal.
Love once gained, now mocked and ashamed.

Darkness once tempered, now flushed all away.
Into that void, my heart now contains.

A code from the past, once lost now learned.
Brings light to the souls, from the heavens untold.

Shouldn't you see, what this worlds declined?
A simple child, now lost in time.

Now as a man, without fear this time.
Returns to the land, and created alive.

But will you see his upcoming wish?
Or will you finally see, his final goodbyes.

This test of the times, too horrid but true.
Brings you this riddle, this first of few.

What can go back? But forwards too.
To look at the past, but the futures come true.
What can there be, without a glance?
What is the name, of this disgrace?
An improvement to the first attempt I did, Hope you all like it.
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darkstormskull's avatar
this was amazing poetry

i like it